Blog 4: Do Looks Make You Beautiful?

3 thoughts on “Blog 4: Do Looks Make You Beautiful?”

  1. Hi Chelsea! Great blog— it flowed well and showed you genuinely had a great understanding of the book. I especially liked the questions you pose in the first two paragraphs; these engaged me as a reader, reading your blog, and were thought-provoking. Additionally, I really enjoyed the quotes you used from the novel— they were all important and significant to the text and work well as textual evidence. “I am less to you than your ivory Hermes or your silver Fuan. You will like them always. How long will you like me? Till I have my first wrinkle, I suppose.” (Wilde 9) is a great quote to highlight the themes of vanity here. Your blog was well put together and informative— great job, Chelsea!

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  2. Hey Chelsea, this was a great blog! One thing I want to add is to quote Rabinowitz, this will help further to your blog as a specific reader. I think you can also discuss more about the narrator in the beginning of the blog rather than summarizing so much of the book. You did a great job with explaining who the authorial audience, and asked some really great open ended questions to get the reader to really think about what really happened in the book. You closing paragraph was also written very well, just a few grammatical errors but otherwise was easy to understand, and included a good connection. I never thought about comparing the book to vampirism, but it does make sense that the reader may think that because the book discussed immortality and looking young and beautiful forever. Really good job!

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  3. Chelsea, great blog! I think this blog is very well put together and very well written. This was a great wrap up of Dorian Gray. You did great wrapping up the book and basically summarizing all of the past blogs in a way. One think I think you should add is to add more about Rabinowitz. I think if you add a quote from Rabinowitz it could really strengthen your arguments and make your whole blog just stronger. I did really enjoy the questions you brought up, they were things I thought as well. In all, I think you did a great job with this blog.

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